Angela
Falkowska
Screenplay
Analyst/Consultant/Story Editor
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Chances
are, you could use a hand in pin-pointing
areas that need improvement. A good script
analyst can help you identify problems
and weaknesses in your screenplay and provide
ways to help you overcome them.
Does
my beginning hook the reader? Does my
protagonist have a “character arc”? Does
my dialogue sprint off the page or lie
lifeless? Are there any faults in the logic of
my plot? Does my story fall flat in the middle
of Act 2? Is my ending so striking that the
audience will be talking about it for
days?
You
need the answers to those questions.
WHAT
IS SCRIPT ANALYSIS?
If
you need precise, detailed suggestions of how
to improve your plot structure, tighten the
description and keep the reader interested,
then a script analysis is exactly the next
step for you.. Do you know how to make your
descriptions brief and your dialogue sparkle?
If the script has become overly long, script
analysis can help you chop out the dead wood
and hone your story down to its essence. And
isn’t that what you wanted to convey all
along?
You
want to get your vision across. You need to
know that the story in your head is now the
story on the page. That’s what a script
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Screenplay
Coverage (up
to 110 pages--Add
$5 per page over
110 pages).
A
plot synopsis , plus an
overview (4 to 6 pages total) of any
problem areas.
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$150. |
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Line-by-Line-
In Depth Script Analysis
(up
to 110 pages--Add
$5 per page over
110 pages).
In-depth, line-by-line,
ANALYSIS emphasizing premise, plot, dialogue,
characters and formatting. 10
to 15 pages total.
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$350.
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Synopsis
editing and Logline Editing
YOUR synopsis down to one page and a logline.
These are
MARKETING ESSENTIALS
for every script! Please submit YOUR synopsis,
which I will then enhance to make it more
appealing. (An extra charge will be applied if
you wish a synopsis written from scratch)
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$60. |
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Editing
for Formatting and Grammar
For
those who ONLY want to make sure that their
script is in prime shape and ready to send to a
producer. For this service I will ONLY be
reading for formatting and grammatical errors.
For this service I will NOT comment on the
script's content. (You will be required to submit the script in proper
screenplay format--Final Draft, Screenwriter
2000, etc.)
Please
Note: I will read the first few pages and
determine if the work involved will demand the
higher cost.
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$150.
to $350. |
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Logline--a
MARKETING ESSENTIAL
One
sentence that says it all. For some,
it's harder than writing the entire
script. I'll give you TWO (for the same
script), so you can
make your choice. You can't beat this deal!
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$25. |
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Script
Doctoring:
Basic
Polish
Improve
the dialogue, tighten the description, clarify
or change the tone, and elevate scenes without
major changes to the plot.
Rewrite
Improve
or change the plot, add or delete significant
elements of a completed script, as well as
improving
the dialogue, tightening the description, clarifying
or change the tone, and elevating scenes.
The
higher price is for a page one rewrite.
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$500.
$3,000.
to
$10,000.
NEGOTIABLE
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Coaching
Imagine
how much simpler your writing and
rewriting would be if you had your
very own coach to guide you every step
of the way. By e-mail or by
telephone.
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$70.
per hour
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Wherever
you live, as long
as your screenplay is written
in English, you can submit your script for
analysis. Simply send me an email at angela@scriptconsult.com
and I'll provide you with mailing instructions.
For
ENDORSEMENTS, QUALIFICATIONS and OTHER LINKS,
Click Here.
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